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Laced up
and
heroin induced
medical mass destruction
and you are my god
and
these walls have flaws.
take breath to the antimatter
WITH MY LEATHER CROSS PAIN AND MY
SELFLESS CHAOTIC
I breathe death with the sheets
and spill blood with the elders,
not pain nor enjoyment
decides on this end
a moment of time
peacefull
manevolent
it ends with one man
and one wish of enlightened.
While the sheets are pulled
back
and the walls
that constrict your creative
are stained green
the colours
and lights
and fickled pill bottles
bring face to the light
and force this
reality.
YOURE ASSURED
and selfless
perfecly
self-assured
and its cold
and it burns
and the wals wont come down
but youre
gold
and its time
to take life by the balls
so BUCK UP
and face lie
and face
self acted dramacies
ONE MORE
SECOND
AGO!
and
heroin induced
medical mass destruction
and you are my god
and
these walls have flaws.
take breath to the antimatter
WITH MY LEATHER CROSS PAIN AND MY
SELFLESS CHAOTIC
I breathe death with the sheets
and spill blood with the elders,
not pain nor enjoyment
decides on this end
a moment of time
peacefull
manevolent
it ends with one man
and one wish of enlightened.
While the sheets are pulled
back
and the walls
that constrict your creative
are stained green
the colours
and lights
and fickled pill bottles
bring face to the light
and force this
reality.
YOURE ASSURED
and selfless
perfecly
self-assured
and its cold
and it burns
and the wals wont come down
but youre
gold
and its time
to take life by the balls
so BUCK UP
and face lie
and face
self acted dramacies
ONE MORE
SECOND
AGO!
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version 2 of "nirvana"
im gonna work this thing to perfection
so please any comments
im gonna work this thing to perfection
so please any comments
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I have to agree with the other critiques.. this version is very good.. quite powerful.. but you lose focus at the end.. and as such, lose power... I think it could be improved through your word choice.. maybe going with something more obscure...